Your hand first held my thigh. Slid the length of my leg and rested just above the knee, before our fingers met and palms pressed. A backward introduction - legs before hands.
We were in a packed little room with a small flickering television; friends crumpled together on couches and sprawled across the floor. But we might as well have been alone, up on our couch, our bodies hidden beneath the soft warmth of a flannel blanket.
My fingertips traced the curves of your knuckles and the length of your fingers. I felt the gentle weight of your hard-skinned palm. Your hand cupped mine delicately as though I was porcelain and as fragile as the moment - the beginning of us.
We were in a packed little room with a small flickering television; friends crumpled together on couches and sprawled across the floor. But we might as well have been alone, up on our couch, our bodies hidden beneath the soft warmth of a flannel blanket.
My fingertips traced the curves of your knuckles and the length of your fingers. I felt the gentle weight of your hard-skinned palm. Your hand cupped mine delicately as though I was porcelain and as fragile as the moment - the beginning of us.
Labels: Husband, Reflections
9 Comments:
I am the touch, the movement, the warmth hidden beneath the blanket. I am the curves that encourage your fingertips, and I am the moment you have experienced - I am now.
Talk about a crisp and vivid moment! Great piece!
Some things in life are very different, but so many have points of life in common.
Weird
P.S. Thank you for the link. It means a lot!
Mella,
With this little piece of writing you certainly have captured the 'Feel' of youth and first Love! (or attraction!) :)
I LOVED it! You made me feel 16 again!
Junie
http://journals.aol.com/juniper5541/JunipersWorld/
Hey great blog, i love the theme
This entry is more than words - it's awareness, electricity, security, anticipation......all the good things about love.
amazing subtle peice of writing .. damn neat :)
Nice tribute to the start of something beautiful.
Very nice writing. I enjoy your blog very much.
It was a nice little qwerp but I think I would remember holding her hand.
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